The NEW Storyboard

Things that we will improve/change.

STORY

At the ending scene, instead of Tim presenting his 'homemade' gift to Cecelia, we will be changing it to show the gift floating down the river.
Reason: It is not the gift that matters, but the thought and feelings that counts. Therefore Tim presenting the gift to Cecelia is not needed.

CHARACTERS


Tim to be redesigned to be more uglier- Add features that makes him ugly. Eg messy hair, ugly colour ect.

Cecelia to be more attractive- Add lady like features. Eg. less broad shoulders, longer neck, lips, eyelashes. ect.

Both Tim and Cecelia has to have much more details at feet area, wing area, colours and body shape.

ENVIRONMENT

Look at RIO for both reference and colour.

Research on mangroves

Colours are all over the place. Use reference pictures to get colour scripts out to help us.

STORYBOARD


Have more over the shoulder shots and also include more of 2 characters together in a single panel so that the viewers know that they are at the same place.

Color Palette

Environment : colours

here are the colored version. Not very good with colours :/

Environments

Hi guys this are the environments that are in grey scale. Will be adding colour to it soon. Tell me if there is anything that should be changed. thanks :)

StoryBoard Version 2

StoryBoard Version 2 - With our characters drawn in

and a few edited panels according to Ms Deda's Comments last time

Characters Color Test